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Mobile Onboarding Redesign

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Submitted by Alex Kim · 2 days ago

What are they designing?

A 3-screen onboarding flow for a habit-tracking app, walking new users through setting their first goal.

Who is it for?

First-time users who just downloaded the app and haven't created an account yet.

What are they trying to improve?

This is my first real onboarding flow. I want to know if it's too many steps, and whether the copy actually explains what the app does.

Discussion (1)

What works:

The illustrations are friendly and the progress dots make it clear there are only 3 steps — that's a good, low-commitment length.

What could improve:

Screen 2 introduces two new concepts at once (streaks and reminders), which is a lot to take in right after screen 1's intro.

Next step:

Consider splitting screen 2 into two lighter screens, or cutting the reminders explanation and introducing it later when the user actually sets one up.

2 days ago